Draft by Draft: The Narrowing Lens of “Stranded” — Discover

At Brevity, Jill Talbot, author of the memoir The Way We Weren’t, gives us a masterclass in revising our writing after rejection: “So many times, we have to get out of our essay’s way.”

via Draft by Draft: The Narrowing Lens of “Stranded” — Discover

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Its not always you

maybe its them

they may have a problem

dont blame yourself

don’t take it too serious

life is too short, masha Allah

Maybe they had a bad day, Alhamdullilah

they needed  a scape goat, well fine

it ended up being you, coincidentally yet unfortunately

its just their insecurities, subhanallah

they are portraying it on you, masha Allah

Get over it , The world does not hate you

Its all fine, get yourself some tea

light up  a candle, extinguish that flame of doubt

It was not you, maybe its just them

 

 

On 50 Posts On WordPress!

so why not add this to the on series, I’m so amazed and proud of myself yes a bit of self love here

I never thought i could do it considering my schedule of school and all that but it has come through

Alhamdullilah , I am so grateful for this opportunity and to my readers, i would just like to say A deep sa thank you as well, mein bohut Khosh ho { I am very happy }

i will hopefully follow this up with a surprising shenanigan of mine , definitely something to cheer us all up , nothing too deep or emotional or senti, overthinking NAH !

I just Realized this post is having five poorly constructed stanzas , can’t call them paragraphs either, my english teacher would not be proud, but its okay Ms. Shruti

And bYE !

Incase no one has realized the whole small b , capital YE is intentional , not a typo just another KHoob si shenanigan.

so book series reveal

whoop whoop, hello to my dear readers

the big reveal is finally here, honestly trying to come up with a poem every week or month is a hassle and it drained me emotionally , since i need inspiration to write but there is something i have daily inspiration about which is writing on things  yes ! i know how to rant in a peaceful and angry way because it can be triggered and i can go either way excessive happiness or sadness and the only way i release it by yes ‘writing ‘

we are going to call this the on series 

so my non computer tech self will try her optimum best to design a new segment for this series insha Allah.

The series starts on 14th of may 2017 , this sunday that is

writers block

i have been having a writers block for quite some time now,  well i almost forgot about my blog for quite some time, until yesterday , yes chordates  is about to take me where invertebrates never did, school has been hectic. my sister was ill all through february , but yay I’m about to start something really cool, so guys stay tuned and apologies for the lack of poetry posts, well its a copyright thing until i renew my blogs copyright and others i can’t post new things much but my wattpad is there for you.

“A precision concision exhibition of contrition” I understood little but wow !

A precision concision exhibition of contrition exposition is a mission of the frisson of fission fusion, suggesting suggestion of congestion ingestion as a conception inception deception, wherein therein, words like birds, slicing thirds, dicing curds and whey, of milk silk and the ilk, the Miss Muffett tuffet neither here nor there, hear no swear, to […]

via Semantic Despair — Kosmogonic

I understood very little but wow ! I’m beyond impressed

With little interest

Oh god here she comes again, I listen with little interest as she laments on her quite lofty yet unscrumptious situation in life, see the thing is she is pampered through and through , with little interest she remarks on the latest exquisite painting she had acquired from la museum du paris , for a meagre amount of $36000

“you know i must quite admit it took me some time to recuperate from the horrific incident two nights ago” she laments once again

“go on marie” i urge her to continue,

” my most recent maid and masseuse all the way from indonesia-sita broke my cartier decorated mirror” she takes a sip of her very healthy looking lime water in a lady like manner

 you see Marie Gilles – Harris, daughter of a french multi millionaire and wife to a hollywood celebrity she met in Ibiza is currently seated across me as it happens every few weeks.

 “Although my husband has already requested for a new one , i couldn’t help but think que fais tu  sita ?, et elle dit desolee mademoiselle harris”   she wipes a mock tear, if her waterproof eyeshadow and beautiful blue eyes would have none of it

” can you imagine this uneducated brat had the gut to say she was sorry” marie ranted

I  took a sip of water from my own glass and wondered off thinking if only you knew “ma cherie mari tu est le brat ici”, this leads her on to rambling,  i suppose while i drank the bland lemon water.

Marie is friends with me because we are from the same school and were so different in school back then , both being together had let me to meeting marie, coincidentally

 “sophia imagine the gall of that asian girl in Jakarta who thought that i was bland and white” she continued

 Apalled at her racist nature , i had to admit juanita was south american from Brazil not Indonesia.

“but marie , juanita was a nice girl to you and she was Brazillian” i pointed the facts

“whatever, ‘je te dit’ ( i tell you )  she was a spoilt girl who thought she  was hardworking”  marie elaborated

Actually juanita went to a $30,000 private school on a scholarship maybe that was her mistake.

why do i still put up with marie some ask ?

because simply put ‘she puts up with me not the other way around’

I have very little interest in most things as you may have noted, an air of arrogance perhaps

” oh marie elle n’est pas importante , lets not waste another moment on her, call that silly maid of yours i need more water”

how endearing  ‘i loved and encouraged myself to work a little ‘

“so lazy sophie the bottle is right in front of you,  go ahead and refill that glass” marie observes

“tu dit ? ( you say ? )  i work atleast and i operate a charity for poor dark babies of lazy parents in Africa country”  i retort

 well ‘vraiement ( truly ) i work as a model and face of chanel I’m sophie Del souza, half french -Italian daughter of a conglomerate multi millionaire so i can sleep if i wished.

I can assure you,  our evening passed by with little interest as poor servants made a lofty dinner which marie and i scrutinized and had a few pins of.

hey everyone today I’m  trying a short story